Free-writting

The free-writing assignment was very useful. Before the writting asssignment I hadnt planed on being as detailed as Iplan on being now. Talking with my peer and free writting on my own has helped me expand my thoughts and now I know I have a better more clear and concise thesis statement.I've taken a step back and re-read my thesis and it is extremely generally, I belive that my thesis should be more specific and be able to be applied to my entire essay.