Arrangement

For my essay I choose to start off with background information on my topic for my introduction paragraph for this particular essay. I choose this method because I am writting directly to my teacher who has insight to what I'm going to write on being that she has already read my thesis statement. For my conclusion paragraph I have decided to repeat my thesis statement because when I write an essay I usually write my introduction and my conclusion first. I believe that my choices will appeal to my audience because it will bring some insight to why I went through the struggles I went through.

Thirty-Eight Who Saw Murder Didn't Call the Police

In a situation like the one in Thirty-Eight Who Saw Murder Didn't Call the Police I would have dedfinetely called the police. I would have called because I would want help and it's the only just thing to do. I don't think I would have gone outside because I wouldn't have been able to put my life in danger. Some factors that would have kept me from going outside would have been wether or not the atacker had a weapon or not and in this case he did.

Free-writting

The free-writing assignment was very useful. Before the writting asssignment I hadnt planed on being as detailed as Iplan on being now. Talking with my peer and free writting on my own has helped me expand my thoughts and now I know I have a better more clear and concise thesis statement.I've taken a step back and re-read my thesis and it is extremely generally, I belive that my thesis should be more specific and be able to be applied to my entire essay.